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It's not an obsession by *pin-koi:iconpin-koi:



The raven haired nin walked down the leafy path of the forest. Konaha was a pretty decent name for the town, he had to admit. He sighed as he looked up at the sun, wondering how long ago he was supposed to be back in class. Lunch break must have ended hours ago, but he shuddered at the thought of returning to them. They were the girls. The horrible, squealing fangirls he despised so much. Munching on a rather bland onigiri, Sasuke walked into a clearing in the trees and found a fallen tree to sit on. Any normal fangirl would definitely squeal at this scene. Pale, feminine, Sasuke resting on a log with the sun illuminating his face. A slight breeze would brush his lips as they touched the riceball once again… thankfully as far as he knew, no one knew about this spot but he, NO ONE. No one to watch him… to stalk him… to interrupt his thou-“Sasuke?”


He hissed and reached for a kunai without thinking. A laugh came from the trees and a masked friend fell out of one.  “Kakashi sensei?” Sasuke asked, surprised. “busted.” He thought.
“Sasuke. You’d better get home, school let out a few minutes ago.” The older mans eyes curved up in what could only be assumed was a smile.
Sasuke’s heart flip flopped in guilt. ‘He was just worried about me…’ he thought. With a gulp, he nodded and leapt out of a normal human’s eyesight, the grey haired ninja used his sharingan as to watch a bit longer… just… to make home sure he got home safely. He tried to convince himself.


The steady beeping of an alarm clock is all that could bring him back to a conscious state. Sasuke sat up and stretched, accidentally knocking a knick-knack off the shelf above him. It rolled under the bed. With a sigh, he ignored the Kisume plushie beside it whilst fishing it out. Itachi could be a creepy man. Sasuke sighed at the thought. It had been years since his brother left, and while Sasuke hated him, he knew in his heart the only reason he wanted to find his brother was simply so he could see him again.


Leaping out of bed, he grabbed his new headband and started the trek to school. Among his arrival, the pink haired girl he despised let her mouth fall open and her eyes widen so. “SASUKE~!”
She squealed. He rolled his eyes, screaming at her on the inside for drawing attention to him. This obviously made all the other girls turn and soon got the same dazed look.
“Sasukee!” Ino let out a dreamy sigh. “Emos are ‘in’ this year, cutie.”
He stopped for a second to send a death glare her way.
“Cute” is the last thing he wanted to be. He quickly made a mental note to kill the blonde and continued in.


It wasn’t so much of an ‘annoyance’ anymore as it was a fetish. Sasuke knew it. Iruka knew it. Hell, most of his fangirls knew it. The fox wasn’t the reason Naruto was so hated, the fact he loved sasuke was. Now it was just creepy. Naruto sat in a rather ‘L’ like position on the desk in front of sasuke. Electricity shooting through his eyes. Sasuke just stared back, mostly for the fact he didn’t know why naruto was so brave today. His black orbs met the blonde’s and he quickly looked away, scanning the room. Iruka stood at the front of the class, jaw at the floor. The girls all huddled to one side of them, watching intently. Some boys in the class watched, the rest paid no attention. Then it happened. A clumsy Kiba bumped Naruto, and the last thing Sasuke saw Naruto’s pink face directly in front of his.


“KYAAAA!” one of the girls screamed, and like a chain reaction, everyone turned to look, Including Kakashi. He had been sitting on a branch outside the window reading when he saw the connection. The jounin’s eyes bugged out of his head and if only for a moment, he felt the embarrassing twinge he was glad no one could see.

©2008-2009 *pin-koi
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Author's Comments

I finally submitted this! :clap:

Full title:
It's not an obsession, just an unfortunate turn of creativity :heart:


ok if you haven't caught this yet.
This is a Naruto fanfiction.
Yaoi, to be exact :D

Pairing: Kakashi x Sasuke :heart:

(c) Naruto owned by Masashi Kishimoto, etc.
I do not own naruto, if I did, it would be a yaoi. :3

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WOOT!
WE NEED MORE OF THIS COUPLE! :stab:
or a fan club? :3

-ahem- anyways...
this is amazing :D good job
:iconixstillxbite:
d 'awwwwwwwwwww
this is so cute kui x3
I've loved watching your writings grow as you got older, I almost feel like a mom or a big sister to you :hug: now I feel close enough to you to say:
You're a gifted writer. make. this. SMUT. :XD:

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:iconpin-koi:
heck yes x3 :hug: thanks
:iconpin-koi:
uwahhhh thank you :glomp:

and I don't know if I could do smut D:
there's people on this site that I, KNOW. yknow? XD
:icondigi-fiend-13:
hmmmmmm yaoi.... *drools*

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Why so serious?

You all just lost the game >:P
:iconrooreru:
The fangirls! :lmao: Ooo, love the story! Way to bring back the kissing scene. XD I'd usually hold back, but... *pokes "Advanced Critique Encouraged"*

You've got a good storyline going, so my main advice is to pay more attention to capitalization, especially around the quotes. A little can go a long way. :3

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capitalization.
capitalization.
capitalization.
got it! 8D
thats what you said about the murder too. o.o; hmm. I must start paying more attention.
thanks ^3^

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